Nayun,I like how you explained how it affects the family, and what it is.One thing I suggest you do is go into more detail about some solutions.-Alex
I like how you wrote about solutions to the social issue.One thing you could work on is facing the audience.
Hi NaYun this is Claire, I really liked how you and Amy were talking very clearly. One thing that you can work on is to try and look at the camera. Claire
Also you need to speak a little louder. CLAIRE
I liked listening to the video.Next time you guys could speak a bit louder.
i liked how you showed how the social issue is like the book your reading ❤️
Nayun,
ReplyDeleteI like how you explained how it affects the family, and what it is.
One thing I suggest you do is go into more detail about some solutions.
-Alex
I like how you wrote about solutions to the social issue.
ReplyDeleteOne thing you could work on is facing the audience.
Hi NaYun this is Claire, I really liked how you and Amy were talking very clearly.
ReplyDeleteOne thing that you can work on is to try and look at the camera.
Claire
Also you need to speak a little louder.
ReplyDeleteCLAIRE
I liked listening to the video.
ReplyDeleteNext time you guys could speak a bit louder.
i liked how you showed how the social issue is like the book your reading ❤️
ReplyDelete